I loke the comics a lot, ended up looking at how the panels were drawn for like half an hour. There is amazing art all over this, such as: The liquids dude, the liquids! drawn beautifully.. maybe except the PG11, p1 little globule that flies off of.. the fabric? Seems a bit weird.. The textures wet on wet things is also incredibe, love it at PG6, p1 <3. I also adore the detail of Umber's eye color being added in panels such as Pg11, p3 where only two dots are present. The goat dog demon man(pronouns they/them so maybe not a man.. but "The goat dog demon being sounds weird) is also very charming looking at Omake1, p2, just look at that handsome devil! Now que the dramatic critique chior!
To start off light, in omake 4, p2 Umber looks very fuuny BUT ALSO inaccurate! The cheek hair as it were, has always been shown round(PG 7, p2; pg13) here its spiky, and with two extra dots that don’t appear anywhere else. Umber’s strand of hair is sometimes just not there..like on PG 3, p 4 and 5 on pg 2, panel 1 Umber’s left earring isn’t there. Page 6, panel 1 up next and oh my god, why is they’re tounge so THIN! even in the mouth, close to the base. we see the top and the bottom of it and the middle lines are going towards each other still!.. I’M not sure of a solution here, a long tounge would obviously have to be thinner, but here it seems too thin.. even though they’re a demon and all so it doesnt really matter.. it just looks weird, ok?!
finally, on pg6 ,on the panel one ,the tail looks fuesed into his back, like its being pushed there, which it clearly isnt! The shot doesnt seem to be Umbra lying on his back, because the tail shoots out in the next panel!(and we see the pose on page 10 p1 too! WITH the tail actually hanging down this time!) There is also an unnatural looking bulge on the base of the tail here(which is no tthere just a page before on the 3dr panel! The only reason I see for having it drawn like this is for the spasm effect we get in the next panel feeling or seeming stronger(as opposed to to a tail just hanging down)
Thanks for coming to my rant about a porn comics I did insted of learning calc 1 as i should, love you love the comics<3 also i think umbra's stripy body hair looks awkward and it's not there in some of the shots with his dick
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Lmfao we got a fucking essay on porn and person complain about MGE
Finally a yaoi Comic where it’s not just big buff niggas fuckin each other ππΎ
lol
If u want girl looking guys fucking go watch straight pork instead. Gtfo here
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I loke the comics a lot, ended up looking at how the panels were drawn for like half an hour. There is amazing art all over this, such as:
The liquids dude, the liquids! drawn beautifully.. maybe except the PG11, p1 little globule that flies off of.. the fabric? Seems a bit weird.. The textures wet on wet things is also incredibe, love it at PG6, p1 <3. I also adore the detail of Umber's eye color being added in panels such as Pg11, p3 where only two dots are present. The goat dog demon man(pronouns they/them so maybe not a man.. but "The goat dog demon being sounds weird) is also very charming looking at Omake1, p2, just look at that handsome devil!
Now que the dramatic critique chior!
To start off light, in omake 4, p2 Umber looks very fuuny BUT ALSO inaccurate! The cheek hair as it were, has always been shown round(PG 7, p2; pg13) here its spiky, and with two extra dots that don’t appear anywhere else.
Umber’s strand of hair is sometimes just not there..like on PG 3, p 4 and 5
on pg 2, panel 1 Umber’s left earring isn’t there.
Page 6, panel 1 up next and oh my god, why is they’re tounge so THIN! even in the mouth, close to the base. we see the top and the bottom of it and the middle lines are going towards each other still!.. I’M not sure of a solution here, a long tounge would obviously have to be thinner, but here it seems too thin.. even though they’re a demon and all so it doesnt really matter.. it just looks weird, ok?!
finally, on pg6 ,on the panel one ,the tail looks fuesed into his back, like its being pushed there, which it clearly isnt! The shot doesnt seem to be Umbra lying on his back, because the tail shoots out in the next panel!(and we see the pose on page 10 p1 too! WITH the tail actually hanging down this time!) There is also an unnatural looking bulge on the base of the tail here(which is no tthere just a page before on the 3dr panel! The only reason I see for having it drawn like this is for the spasm effect we get in the next panel feeling or seeming stronger(as opposed to to a tail just hanging down)
Thanks for coming to my rant about a porn comics I did insted of learning calc 1 as i should, love you love the comics<3
also i think umbra's stripy body hair looks awkward and it's not there in some of the shots with his dick
Ur over analysing things… GOOD ART IS FUVKIN GOOD ART!
Retard talk
That nigga is tripping
You’re so real for this ngl (don’t worry about the edgy people lmao)
Okay
Cool
They have some surprisingly good drip
I think I could pull it off better
It petty rare to see a non-binary character in a porn comic but I’m not opposed to it also I like the art syle