The character design could use some work. I feel like I’m just staring at some guy named Chad ™ who’s the mean rich kid from every Christmas movie. Homophobic undertones with Tracer’s segment could use a fix. The section that starts chapter 2 makes no sense. If the time travel capabilities are for Tracer, why does it effect Chad ™? Also, the whole wormhole that could create on it’s own. Chapter 3 is a decent chapter. My main concerns are where Widowmaker’s clothes went, how did Chad ™ escape from the chains, and everything’s going a bit fast. Positions change way too quickly. Chapter 4 is ok. It works for what it is. Overall issues : Every single character (except Ana) is aware this guy is in a relationship. We don’t need a run-down of the character’s abilities if we never see them in action. Widowmaker’s mine is NOT some sleeping gas thing. It is a DOT affecting poison. Also, why the hell would she not just kill him? And how did she transport him to her sex dungeon thing??? Why would he not respawn??? We have proof that the characters respawn in this universe from page 7. Overall : 4/10. It could be a lot better. Fixing a few things, and adding some extra panels could boost this a lot more. It’s 2 AM and I’m analyzing an Overwatch Porn Comic.
Yeah, this feels like it has some homophobic undertones. Lesbians don’t need ‘male pleasures.’ We don’t need dick to survive. I feel like it wasn’t necessarily intended, but it should be fixed at least.
Yeh, that’s what I thought. A new character/OC shagging 1 girl it’s the expectations, 2 girls is ok, but +3 you know there’s something behind all this and this Jake did it with 4
Doesn’t Jake have a gf
Yeah he actually cheat on her with tracer, pharah d’va and widowmaker
This is the most overpowered oc I’ve ever seen
depends on the damage of each shot
The character design could use some work. I feel like I’m just staring at some guy named Chad ™ who’s the mean rich kid from every Christmas movie. Homophobic undertones with Tracer’s segment could use a fix. The section that starts chapter 2 makes no sense. If the time travel capabilities are for Tracer, why does it effect Chad ™? Also, the whole wormhole that could create on it’s own. Chapter 3 is a decent chapter. My main concerns are where Widowmaker’s clothes went, how did Chad ™ escape from the chains, and everything’s going a bit fast. Positions change way too quickly. Chapter 4 is ok. It works for what it is. Overall issues : Every single character (except Ana) is aware this guy is in a relationship. We don’t need a run-down of the character’s abilities if we never see them in action. Widowmaker’s mine is NOT some sleeping gas thing. It is a DOT affecting poison. Also, why the hell would she not just kill him? And how did she transport him to her sex dungeon thing??? Why would he not respawn??? We have proof that the characters respawn in this universe from page 7. Overall : 4/10. It could be a lot better. Fixing a few things, and adding some extra panels could boost this a lot more. It’s 2 AM and I’m analyzing an Overwatch Porn Comic.
Nigga you wrote a whole ass essay
Fun fact, tracer is canonically lesbian
Yeah, this feels like it has some homophobic undertones. Lesbians don’t need ‘male pleasures.’ We don’t need dick to survive. I feel like it wasn’t necessarily intended, but it should be fixed at least.
Who cares? It’s a porn comic
I care 🙁 lesbian erasure sucks for us gays man
This guy would be OP
This really just seems like a self insert that really wants to cheat on there partner
Yeh, that’s what I thought. A new character/OC shagging 1 girl it’s the expectations, 2 girls is ok, but +3 you know there’s something behind all this and this Jake did it with 4