Asuna doujin comic porn

Good art but the plot was way too fast. I know “porn logic” exists but please slow it down. It feels like there should have been an least two or more panels between panels 3 & 4. Art isn’t easy so that’s not an easy request but there should have been more tension. Maybe they watch a movie or something and either he was awkward wondering if it was a prank or she was awkward to fit some kind of shyness trope. Then you add the climax (no pun intended) where either he mistakenly calls her out thinking it’s a prank or she calls him out asking why he hasn’t made a move yet and you write his character with a naivety flaw which either way leads to her exposing herself for him.