I hope there will be a part 2 of this cuz i want more of this story (i love this type of stories where the main character has some mental shit going on)
Like I said in the other post, I didn/ like a lot things in the comic. That last Author’ Note kinda cleared up the intention the author was going for but was quite .. badly executed. Yes, shootings and psychological things are important in their own aspects but it didn’t make the story bittersweet, it made it like a.. a weird statement to make that didn’t really convince the viewer. It kinda started to get annoying and unlikable, not because it’s a/was a porn comic but as a story… but these things can be executed properly, if you leave the tragic thinking behind. I’ve done the same mistakes in writing, thinking too edgy and then it just does not make sense and is very unlikable and distant… I know Author said she wasn’t edgy but you know.. that’s the vibe.
The story is good and I liked it so much, but I have two questions: -why is it censored? It’s a porn -how did she survive to the headshot? I didn’t understand
If you’re looking for a simple meet ‘n fuck, this isn’t it. This is more story than smut, but that isn’t a bad thing. The characters have depth and after 182 pages, you begin to sympathize with the main character and what she went through. I wouldn’t call it, “Edgy”, I’d call it realistic.
I am absolutely on the opposite with that. I would call it edgy, I began to lose sympathy for the main character and she started to get real annoying and then the psychological traumas and shit were thrown in the mix. The side characters were pretty good. It’s not realistic, I would literally write a fall of text to just say why..
This is too mature and real to be in hd porn comics. Bravo
Came here to jerk off, literally stopped doing it so i could focus on the story, and now i’m crying
This story touched me so close, especially the ending.
Now THIS is a comic. Porn though? Not so much.
Keep up the good work, even if it got a little bit ‘edgy’ I still really liked the story.
I hope there will be a part 2 of this cuz i want more of this story (i love this type of stories where the main character has some mental shit going on)
Really wanted to see a panel or two with her and sol, amazing story none the less
Like I said in the other post, I didn/ like a lot things in the comic. That last Author’ Note kinda cleared up the intention the author was going for but was quite .. badly executed. Yes, shootings and psychological things are important in their own aspects but it didn’t make the story bittersweet, it made it like a.. a weird statement to make that didn’t really convince the viewer. It kinda started to get annoying and unlikable, not because it’s a/was a porn comic but as a story… but these things can be executed properly, if you leave the tragic thinking behind. I’ve done the same mistakes in writing, thinking too edgy and then it just does not make sense and is very unlikable and distant… I know Author said she wasn’t edgy but you know.. that’s the vibe.
I don’t think they said it was supposed to be bittersweet, they just said that they liked those kinds of endings.
The story is good and I liked it so much, but I have two questions:
-why is it censored? It’s a porn
-how did she survive to the headshot? I didn’t understand
Yea you know… its Fantasy?
It censored as a joke, because the protagonist is a police and should not prostitute herself etc.
Only ~80% of headshots are actually fatal
Came for the porn and stayed for the story. I wish it wasn’t censored since it IS supposed to be a porn comic but overall It was a good story
i’d say that was good comic but if u looking to nut to this good fucking luck dude
If you’re looking for a simple meet ‘n fuck, this isn’t it. This is more story than smut, but that isn’t a bad thing. The characters have depth and after 182 pages, you begin to sympathize with the main character and what she went through. I wouldn’t call it, “Edgy”, I’d call it realistic.
yea it just doesn’t feel right on the site
I am absolutely on the opposite with that. I would call it edgy, I began to lose sympathy for the main character and she started to get real annoying and then the psychological traumas and shit were thrown in the mix. The side characters were pretty good. It’s not realistic, I would literally write a fall of text to just say why..
Damn good porn and that’s hard too find
Started out good and just turned super edgy for the sake of being edgy and nothing else
I agree but a lot of the readers aren’t going to realize that, but that’s a also part of psychology, emotional and cognitive manipulation…