[Kikuharu Nakamura] Ben-Mom Short Comic (2) – Ben 10 x Rook [Eng] comic porn

look there’s a lot of problems here if you can look over: mpreg, gay, age play and a few others it’s still fundamentally broken I barely read it but this comics is terribly structured reading through it is like trying to understand the Bible after its been put through Google translate and set to Japanese 100 times oh and the pages were jumbled around. the plot is simple enough on a baseline and I get its a porn comic but if you’re gonna make it this long…please give it a theme try to make it a genuine piece of writing the random breakdowns make no sense (like I said I perused it maybe I didn’t understand it all) why did Ben say “don’t you hate me?” and then say “I HATE YOU” like 10 pages later I’m doing a full reading so I’ll understand but still